Friday, June 4, 2021

                             

                          How a snappers life 

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How does a snapper's life cycle work? Well it’s easy.  First at the tippity top it starts with the eggs the mum lays the eggs beside a mangrove tree the. The Mom waits  for about 6 months and then they hach after that they stay in the mangrove antill they are older. When they are older they leave the mangroves. There is  about a 50% chance that the snapper gets caught. If that does not happen it will restart.


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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 9, 2021 at 11:58 AM

    I really like that piece of writing! very descriptive.

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  2. AnonymousJune 11, 2021 at 1:27 PM

    thank you mate

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  3. AnonymousJune 11, 2021 at 1:28 PM

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  4. Tessa wJune 17, 2021 at 11:28 AM

    Hi max I like how you did an explanation about snapper if my dad were reading this he´d think this would be great. But you really should add a little bit more writing and never make creepy picture like that so big!!!!
    ( Its a little creepy ! just saying)

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  5. AnonymousJune 17, 2021 at 11:35 AM

    Hi Max i learnt lot's from reading this story about snappers although like Tessa said you need to added a bit more writing and for next steps i think you need to start adding paragraphs in your writing.

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